SacredOrderOfTheMagi

Hey all!

Dunno if I mentioned it or not, but Bane of Thunder is done!! I've been sending queries to agents lately and so far, I've gotten two rejections :P Guess I'm not worth the time of the others!

Hah!

So, anyways, this may sound sudden after that last statement, but I've already got my idea for my next novel. I love it. I'll just copy a direct conversation I was having with one of the most wonderful women in the world.

Aziel

Lien

Soryu - Sorey wants a story! - Sorry Sorey

Sorena

illena - Lily

MC: Aziel (Az syllable = mystery (EG; Azaroth, Azoth, Azoch)

Ant: Lien

Soryu - Random Orphan Girl

Lillena - poor woman who helps the orphans

     - She's wronged/someone breaks in

     - She's always there for the kids, gives what she can; food, blankets, shed for warmth, toys etc

     The kids are chased and by instinct go to the only place they find safe; Lillena's house. The resulting trouble by those chasing the kids results in her getting wronged.

     Liem does the whole "I don't care, we had to" approach, Aziel feels bad.

     Aziel is the nice kid who loves stories and imagination. The typical protagonist - the one people relate to and fall in love with.

     Lien is the tough guy, Aziel's best friend, but a tough guy nonetheless; the kind of relationship that Squal and Seipher have.They hate each other but love each other, it's just a little less than hate.

     A girl comes into the picture, the two kids are orphans in a port town in southwestern Deldaime. She comes from a boat, the kids are always too poor to get on board so they never know what it's like.

     Aziel meets her first and loves the stories she tells, she loves his imagination and energy, they make fast friends. At the same time, she meets Lien without Aziel knowing.

      Later on she'll leave, it'll turn out that Lien will have a love intrest, but Aziel will sorta too.

      Secretly she wouldn't've come from the boat, she'd be a poor girl who snuck onboard for a new life and is running for some reason I dunno yet

     .That's where the rivalry between Aziel and Lien comes from for the rest of the book, they part ways, Aziel tries desparately to cling onto the friendship, Lien feels there's no way to go back to the past, etc

So that's it, and that's all for now. See you all later!